Template:Did you know nominations/Juan de Casas

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The result was: promoted by Kimikel talk 17:18, 6 September 2024 (UTC)

Juan de Casas

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... that Juan de Casas left the Mantuano creoles out of his planned junta in colonial Venezuela?

Source: https://www.google.com/books/edition/Simon_Bolivar_and_the_South_American_War/faNkEAAAQBAJ

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Created by Mebigrouxboy (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Mebigrouxboy (talk) 19:40, 29 July 2024 (UTC).

The article is new and long enough. The sources it cites are of high quality. I see neither close paraphrasing nor neutrality issues. I do, however, think that the hook is not interesting to a broader audience. Fortunately, I think such a hook can be produced from this article. I would propose:
ALT2: ... that the Spanish military governor of Venezuela, Juan de Casas, cried after the French demanded that he accept a Frenchman as king?

This hook would need to be reviewed by someone else though. Surtsicna (talk) 16:56, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

@Surtsicna and Mebigrouxboy: ALT1 lacks an end-of-sentence citation.--Laun chba ller 12:55, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

I hate that rule with a burning passion but in this case it did make me realize that the citations got mixed up so I fixed it all. Thanks, Launchballer. Surtsicna (talk) 18:02, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

(I hear you. I still haven't forgiven WP:BLP for Horsegiirl.) I can't read a word of that source so approving this AGF.--Laun chba ller 08:48, 6 September 2024 (UTC)