Template:Did you know nominations/John Hemmingham
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The result was: promoted by Mentoz86 (talk) 13:01, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
John Hemmingham
[edit]- ... that John Hemmingham was banned from Sheffield United's Bramall Lane stadium because of concerns that playing music might structurally damage the stands?
Created by The C of E (talk). Self nom at 14:14, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
- The article is new and long enough.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 16:03, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
- OK, so is it OK to add the green tick to the nomination? The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 21:39, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
- No, sorry, i had to be offline for some time. I will continue my review.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 21:50, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
The content of the article is very interesting. Since it is about living person I verified the sources and enjoyed reading them and this interesting article. The article is within policy. The hook is not too long (154 characters). I have only one proposal. It is not exactly "playing music" which is dangerous according to the presented source. It is "their music", so I suggest to reword the hook slightly. It is not condition for the tick, because any music is music, but I have a feeling it would be more precise.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 23:01, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
