Template:Did you know nominations/Jillian Lane
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 09:23, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
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Jillian Lane
[edit]... that Jillian Lane was the psychic of Michael Jackson?
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Created by Bonkers The Clown (talk). Self nominated at 09:34, 20 October 2013 (UTC).
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- Where is the article does it say Lane was MJ's "personal" psychic, please? The last paragraph of the Career section actually suggests that she is not -- maybe it was after MJ's death that she became a "celebrity psychic"? Please clarify and insert dates & footnotes as needed. Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 11:59, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
- Removed "personal"... I used that term based on a source's title. The source itself doesn't clarify when she became a "celebrity", so I think it's fine. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 12:05, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
- Maybe "one of"? Can't tell who else MJ consulted when he called the medium hotline. --PFHLai (talk) 13:16, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Welsh psychic Jillian Lane had a client list which included Michael Jackson? --PFHLai (talk) 13:33, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, reads good, I've changed "that" to "which" just because it's more pleasant to hear. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 13:29, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
- Where is the article does it say Lane was MJ's "personal" psychic, please? The last paragraph of the Career section actually suggests that she is not -- maybe it was after MJ's death that she became a "celebrity psychic"? Please clarify and insert dates & footnotes as needed. Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 11:59, 27 October 2013 (UTC)
ALT1 hook needs a new reviewer. (Note: "that" vs. "which" is a regional preference: American English generally uses "that", while British generally uses "which"; I'm not sure how the others fall out. Since Lane was Welsh, "which" is probably the best choice.) BlueMoonset (talk) 18:51, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
