Template:Did you know nominations/Jesse Grupper
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Z1720 talk 14:15, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
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Jesse Grupper
- ... that when not rock climbing, American Olympian Jesse Grupper develops exoskeletons?
- Reviewed: Fantasy (Las Vegas show)
- Comment: Nominated on behalf of an IP editor, who will (as usual) provide the QPQ. Grupper is going to compete in the lead semifinal of the men's combined rock climbing. That date is not far away but if we can get this reviewed in a hurry, it'll fit into that date alright as we've only got two other nominations (on most days, we have three).
5x expanded by Schwede66 (talk) and 2603:7000:2101:AA00:C90F:5F27:BE03:9B87 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 154 past nominations.
Schwede66 08:51, 3 August 2024 (UTC).
- There's some close paraphrasing that will need to be addressed before this can go anywhere. I trust the IP editor will get onto this. Schwede66 08:06, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
A 5x expansion has been verified. The minor close paraphrasing remains unresolved, so that has to be fixed first. His date of birth is currently uncited in the article and will need to be referenced. The New Jersey 101.5 reference seems to be showing the wrong URL, so that needs to be fixed. There's a minor typo in the article: "Pan American Gamess" instead of "Games". Finally, the IFSC results reference needs to be made more specific since right now it just uses the main landing page rather than the results for the actual competition. Otherwise, the QPQ has been done and verified, so this should be good to go once the issues I raised are fixed. The provided hook meets DYKINT and is confirmed in the source. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:46, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- I also forgot to mention that, in case anyone else notices, the Weebly reference should be okay as it's Grupper's personal website and thus should be fine per WP:SPS. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:49, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Schwede66: Given how this is supposed to run very soon and the IP hasn't responded yet, you may have to be the one to fix the issues in their place. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:20, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- I have no doubt that we'll hear something soon. Schwede66 01:53, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- I've fixed some problems while waiting for IP. Date of birth now cited. The New Jersey 101.5. story "Look for these NJ athletes at the Paris Olympics" is below the murder story on that page, so the weird URL seems actually correct. For "Pan American Gamess", it now is piped to the actual event page and typo is fixed. For ifsc results, I've added a story from gripped re overall bronze and changed main ifsc landing page to Grupper's athlete page on that site. On that page, choose year "2022" and discipline "lead" for places results which verifies 2 x wins, 1 x 2nd and 1 x 3rd. JennyOz (talk) 02:40, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- User:JennyOz Thanks for your assistance on this. User:Narutolovehinata5 I've addressed any close paraphrasing I could see with the tools - most of it was of course names, which do not lend themselves to revision. Any other closely paraphrased sentence fragments have I believe been addressed.2603:7000:2101:AA00:1991:AE90:47B0:AF60 (talk) 11:04, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- Almost good to go. The Weebly page just needs to be filled up with a title and other descriptive stuff, and I'll give this the tick once that's done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:42, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- User:Z1720, this is supposed to go into Queue 1, which you promoted. Given that I nominated this, I shouldn't promote this to queue when Narutolovehinata5 eventually signs off on this (I fixed the additional issue, if ever there was one, immediately; Narutolovehinata5 got a ping via edit summary). I'd be happy to make a hole in the queue for this item to be promoted into. Just let me know if like me to do so. Schwede66 09:40, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
Yes, that should do it. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:28, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- User:Z1720, this is supposed to go into Queue 1, which you promoted. Given that I nominated this, I shouldn't promote this to queue when Narutolovehinata5 eventually signs off on this (I fixed the additional issue, if ever there was one, immediately; Narutolovehinata5 got a ping via edit summary). I'd be happy to make a hole in the queue for this item to be promoted into. Just let me know if like me to do so. Schwede66 09:40, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Almost good to go. The Weebly page just needs to be filled up with a title and other descriptive stuff, and I'll give this the tick once that's done. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:42, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
