Template:Did you know nominations/Jagadguru Kripalu Maharaj

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 22:00, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

Jagadguru Kripalu Maharaj

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~~... that at the age of 34, Jagadguru Shri Kripalu Ji Maharaj was awarded the 5th Jagadguru title 54 years back on 14th January 1957?~~

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Created by Lotusjuice (talk). Nominated by Ansumang (talk) at 12:42, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Not sure what this is, but I would agree that the article obviously meets the full criteria for DYN. Lotusjuice (talk) 13:08, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

Age, length OK. Offline hook ref AGF. But the hook is a little flat. How about:
ALT1: ... that after giving seven days of speeches before 500 Hindu scholars, Jagadguru Kripalu Maharaj was named fifth Jagadguru (world teacher) at the age of 34? Yoninah (talk) 15:40, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

ALT1 is fine. Thank you Yoninah. -- ɑηsuмaη ^{ʈ ᶏ ɭ Ϟ} 17:02, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

I added a bit more from one of the sources, but the figure of "7 days" is in the offline source. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:26, 11 December 2011 (UTC)