Template:Did you know nominations/Ishūretsuzō

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:40, 21 July 2022 (UTC)

Ishūretsuzō

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Ikotoi, chieftain of Akkeshi, by Kakizaki Hakyō (1790)

... that Ishūretsuzō depicts Ainu chieftains (Ikotoi pictured) in Qing robes and Russian military coats as well as an "Ininkari bear" (white brown bear)? Source: Qing robes & Russian military coats: the cited book Ishuretsuzo, the Image of Ezo, p. 121; white brown bears: [1]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Action bias
- Comment: Nominating now, but I shall expand today/tomorrow, thank you.

Created by Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk). Self-nominated at 13:31, 15 June 2022 (UTC).

I'd do an alt hook clarifying that Ishūretsuzō is a series of painted portraits. New, long and neutral enough, well-written. Pic is ok for main page. AGF on hook pt1, pt2 checks out (but I note they date the bear painting to 1791). Earwig picks up nothing (except to confirm hook pt1). QPQ done. Johnbod (talk) 21:20, 17 June 2022 (UTC)

ALT 1: ... that the painted portrait series Ishūretsuzō features Ainu chieftains (Ikotoi pictured) in Qing robes and Russian military coats as well as an "Ininkari bear" (white brown bear)?

Thanks. Also GTG. Johnbod (talk) 03:05, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

I think the wording of ALT1 could be better, suggestion below:

ALT1A: ... that the painted portrait series Ishūretsuzō features Ainu chieftains (example pictured) in Qing robes, Russian military coats, and as an "Ininkari bear" (white brown bear)?

This hook removed Ikotoi's name (as there is no wikilink, so readers can't discover who/what Ikotoi is) and changes some of the wording. @Maculosae tegmine lyncis and Johnbod: thoughts? Z1720 (talk) 17:51, 19 July 2022 (UTC)

Seems ok to me - he's clearly one of the Ainu chieftans. With no article, what would his name add for the reader? Johnbod (talk) 21:04, 19 July 2022 (UTC)

@Johnbod: If ALT1A is approved, can you add the green tick so let the preppers know that this is ready? Thanks, Z1720 (talk) 15:32, 20 July 2022 (UTC)

any other 3 hooks. Johnbod (talk) 16:23, 20 July 2022 (UTC)