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Heike Heubach
- ... that Heike Heubach became the first deaf member of the German Bundestag? Source: https://www.independent.co.uk/news/ap-berlin-olaf-scholz-bundestag-bavaria-b2516308.html
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Oakland California Temple
- Comment: Historic first in Germany
Created by Moondragon21 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Moondragon21 (talk) 16:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC).
Newly created article, long enough and sourced throughout, it appears to be written neutrally. Hook fact is interesting enough and sourced. The image is free to use, based on its license, and could be added to the nom. QPQ has been provided. There is some close paraphrasing in the following, please rewrite the italicized bits (also, I imagine there's a word missing at the end of "fixed place in the" and "As and when" is ungrammatical):
As a parliamentarian, Heubach will have a fixed place in the, unlike most other lawmakers, with interpreters sat close to interpret speeches and her questions. As and when she makes her own speeches, an interpreter with a microphone will have a place next to the Bundestag's stenographers to interpret her speeches to translate for other lawmakers to understand.
– Muboshgu (talk) 23:18, 5 April 2024 (UTC)- @Moondragon21: Courtesy ping to address this issue. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:46, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: I believe I have addressed it. Moondragon21 (talk) 13:16, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- It's up to Muboshgu to complete the review. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:26, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Moondragon21: I don't think the issues is addressed. The paragraph:
- It's up to Muboshgu to complete the review. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:26, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: I believe I have addressed it. Moondragon21 (talk) 13:16, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Moondragon21: Courtesy ping to address this issue. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:46, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
As a parliamentarian, Heubach will have a fixed seating place in the Reichstag building, unlike most other lawmakers, with interpreters sat close to interpret speeches and her questions. When Heubach is scheduled to make her own speeches, an interpreter with a microphone will have a place next to the Bundestag's stenographers to interpret her speeches to translate for other lawmakers to understand.
- is too close to
Heubach will have a fixed place in the plenary hall, unlike most other lawmakers, according to the Bundestag’s administration, with interpreters located near her to interpret speeches and her questions. When she makes speeches herself, an interpreter with a microphone will have a place next to the Bundestag’s stenographers to interpret for other lawmakers.
from this source. – Muboshgu (talk) 01:22, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Muboshgu: I have rewritten the paragraph. Moondragon21 (talk) 13:51, 23 April 2024 (UTC)