Template:Did you know nominations/Hazel P. Heath
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:50, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
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Hazel P. Heath
[edit]- ... that Hazel P. Heath paid children to pick wild berries for her jam and jelly business, and "when the fishing season was slim", paid fishermen to harvest berries too?
- ALT1:... that Hazel P. Heath, former mayor of Homer, Alaska, is credited as a founder of the Pratt Museum?
- Reviewed: Lava bear
Created by Grand'mere Eugene (talk). Self-nominated at 21:20, 10 September 2016 (UTC).
Date and length fine. I think the original is better given people will be more interested in a woman possibly flouting child labour laws rather than being a governor of some Pratt's museum. QPQ done. No close paraphrasing. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 09:18, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
- Original hook seems long; I prefer ALT 1 for these reason. Alternatively, we could use the original hook but drop the fishermen bit. Neutralitytalk 18:48, 13 September 2016 (UTC)