Template:Did you know nominations/Harold Clunn
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:46, 20 August 2019 (UTC)
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Harold Clunn
- ... that British author Harold Clunn saw the destruction done by the London Blitz during the Second World War as a blessing?
- ALT1:... that British author Harold Clunn saw the London Blitz as a blessing in disguise?
- Reviewed: Garçon Wines
Created by Philafrenzy (talk) and MilborneOne (talk) and Whispyhistory (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 21:14, 25 July 2019 (UTC).
Good work as usual. New, long enough, cited, neutral, no copyvio. The hook is great, but I'd remove "during the Second World War" because readers know when the Blitz happened. If you wanted to make it even leaner and hookier, remove "the destruction done by" as well. The one other issue is that the editor who completed the QPQ wasn't actually the nominator, but I'll IAR. – Teratix ₵ 07:06, 28 July 2019 (UTC)
- @Teratix: Thanks, shorter ALT added and made it blessing in disguise as that is now cited. Philafrenzy (talk) 07:29, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
