Template:Did you know nominations/Gregory P. McGuckin

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:57, 22 February 2012 (UTC)

Gregory P. McGuckin

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... that New Jersey Assemblyman Gregory P. McGuckin is the son of the first directly elected mayor of Brick Township, New Jersey?

Created/expanded by Offenbach (talk). Nominated by Wilhelmina Will (talk) at 05:01, 25 January 2012 (UTC)

Reviewed: Emiliodonta

Age, length OK. No close paraphrasing seen. Most of the references are primary sources, but there are a few secondary sources for this newly-elected politician. The hook ref, however, is based on a Facebook page. Could you provide a secondary reference for this statement, or perhaps another hook based on a secondary reference? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 14:51, 6 February 2012 (UTC)

A second source has been added. --Offenbach (talk) 02:51, 22 February 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for adding more refs. Hook ref verified. I changed "New Jersey Republican" to "New Jersey Assemblyman" for more accuracy. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 10:21, 22 February 2012 (UTC)