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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:51, 16 August 2018 (UTC)

Green Bay Packers Foundation

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Converted from a redirect by Gonzo fan2007 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:13, 7 August 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good to go. The checker tool threw up a red flag due to its contraction prior to becoming a redirect, but I think this fits the guidelines. SounderBruce 01:10, 8 August 2018 (UTC)

  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but I think the hook is a little repetitive, and the explanation that the charity, not the shareholders, would receive the proceeds seems more hooky. What do you think about this rewording?
  • ALT1: ... that if the Green Bay Packers football team, valued at $2.5 billion, was ever sold, all the profits would go to its charitable foundation rather than its shareholders? Yoninah (talk) 19:46, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per SounderBruce. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 19:48, 16 August 2018 (UTC)