Template:Did you know nominations/Grandy Glaze

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:52, 2 September 2018 (UTC)

Grandy Glaze

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Grandy Glaze

• ... that basketball player Grandy Glaze (pictured) attended four different high schools and two different colleges?
  • ALT1:... that basketball player Grandy Glaze (pictured) missed five games after diving for a loose ball and dislocating his shoulder? Source: [1]

Improved to Good Article status by Editorofthewiki (talk). Nominated by Runningibis (talk) at 17:24, 13 August 2018 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough, I prefer the second hook, image OK, QPQ exempt. A couple things: some phrases, like "the highlight of the year", "fell out of favor", "impressed the Sixers" appear to be editorializing; make the transition between the freshman and sophomore years clearer; cite his birth date and place.
  • @Hameltion: I have cleared up the cases of editorializing in the article. I also prefer ALT1. Runningibis (talk) 22:24, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
    • Okay now. Hameltion (talk, contribs) 02:20, 16 August 2018 (UTC)