Template:Did you know nominations/Furcifer antimena

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 05:17, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

Furcifer antimena

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~~... that the Antimena Chameleon can be found over an area of 6,310 square kilometres (2,440 sq mi)?~~

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Created/expanded by Thine Antique Pen (talk). Self nom at 16:53, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

just scrapes in - I had to remove some material, but luckily could add a bit to keep it above 1500 chars. The type locality comment needs a better source and better information, so removed. Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:53, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Actually the hook is uninteresting - I'd go with something more like:

ALT1... that the Antimena Chameleon of Madagascar is threatened by forest clearance for agriculture and charcoal?

A bit better but sadly not unusual.....Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:55, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

I have done a bit more expansion. How about - Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:36, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

ALT2 ... that the male Antimena Chameleon of Madagascar has a crest running along its back?

Expanded article and ALT hooks need review; striking original, uninteresting hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:47, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

good to go. hook cited. Casliber (talk · contribs) 23:04, 29 November 2012 (UTC)