Template:Did you know nominations/François Dominique Séraphin

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:28, 17 August 2012 (UTC)

François Dominique Séraphin

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... that François Dominique Séraphin developed and popularised shadow plays in 18th-century France?

Reviewed: Gravity (Lecrae album)

Created/expanded by Violetriga (talk). Self nom at 23:58, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Length, date, hook OK, hook confirmed by online ref 4. But a citation is required directly after the sentence on which the hook is based. I would suggest adding ref 4 (again) directly following the first sentence; then it should be fine. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 16:24, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

But that's in the lead - the content of the hook is all clearly citing within the main section of the prose. violet/riga _^[talk] 17:51, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
Done for clarity. violet/riga _^[talk] 22:35, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 07:22, 17 August 2012 (UTC)