Template:Did you know nominations/Fish Keitseng

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The result was: promoted by Yazan (talk) 13:00, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Fish Keitseng

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... that the Motswana ANC activist Fish Keitseng helped anti-Apartheid leaders including Nelson Mandela and Thabo Mbeki to move through Bechuanaland?

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Created/expanded by Soman (talk). Self nom at 15:18, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

Artiicle satisfies all DYK rules. Reference 5 is cited to the hook. Good to go.--Nvvchar. 20:02, 7 November 2012 (UTC)

The hook does not make grammatical sense. Should it say "helped" rather than "help", or something else? A basic problem like this should not be ignored when reviewing a nomination: "good to go", if it must be used, should mean exactly that. Another point about the hook: even though "like" is shorter, if Keitseng actually did help Mandela and Mbeki, then "including" should be used instead: it wasn't leaders like them, it was them. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:56, 7 November 2012 (UTC)

Oops, my mistake. Of course it should be 'helped'. I changed the hook accordingly. --Soman (talk) 06:41, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

Looking for new reviewer to check hook, and also weigh in on the "including" issue. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:54, 16 November 2012 (UTC)

I've tidied the references in the article, and made a non-controversial chance to "including" in the reference, which is more correct, and more interesting. Spotchecks reveal no close paraphrasing, and the article satisfies all criteria. Good to go. Harrias ^talk 14:35, 21 November 2012 (UTC)