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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:51, 28 August 2014 (UTC)

Eugene Neeley

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Photograph of Eugene Neeley from The New York Times, October 8, 1916

  • ... that one-armed football player Eugene Neeley (pictured) became a consensus first-team All-American despite his missing right limb?

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nominated at 05:49, 24 August 2014 (UTC).

  • A bit short (DYK Check says 1407 characters); otherwise, new enough, neutral, sourced, and without apparent copyvio. Image is PD due to age. The hook is interesting, but could we leave off "despite his missing right limb"? I feel like it's redundant. EricEnfermero HOWDY! 10:05, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. I've expanded the article a fair bit and offer a couple of alt hooks for you to choose from. Cbl62 (talk) 16:42, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
  • alt 1 ... that one-armed football player Eugene Neeley (pictured) became a consensus first-team All-American?
  • alt 2 ... that All-American football player Eugene Neeley (pictured) used the stump from his severed right arm "with telling effect in blocking and straight arming"?
  • ALT1 is good to go now. I think it's a little hookier than the longer alternative. Good work. EricEnfermero HOWDY! 05:29, 27 August 2014 (UTC)