The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 07:22, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
Comment: This is my first DYK nomination. Glad for any feedback.
Created by Engmaj (talk). Self-nominated at 17:15, 12 December 2021 (UTC).
All in all, really nicely written and interesting Article and hook! Since DYK review is not just about nomination but the article itself
1. On Wikipedia, we only use simple "apostrophes" instead of “curly quotes” per MOS:APOS.
2. Do not directly link to external links within the article content, for example of the schools mentioned.
3. The Article itself should have more category tags than just the birth/death year
4. The article and hook both could use more wiki links. Not everyone knows what Kristallnacht is or when, so change hook to reflect that it was 3 years prior. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 20:46, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
All points addressed. (Anyone can fix these points). Merry Christmas Engmaj. Victuallers (talk) 21:42, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
Overall: Final review, this is ready! I prefer Hook 1, but Hook ALT1 is also acceptable. Thank you for working on the changes! ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 23:17, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
ALT1 to T:DYK/P1