Template:Did you know nominations/Eddie Loos
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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 15:22, 9 January 2016 (UTC)
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Eddie Loos
[edit]- ... that professional golfer Eddie Loos (pictured) accidentally hit Walter Hagen's ball in the 1931 Los Angeles Open, earning a two-stroke penalty and a loss to Ed Dudley?
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... that professional golfer Eddie Loos (pictured) was found dead in the bathtub of his Laguna Beach, California, home in 1950? - Reviewed: The Talk of the Town (horse)
- Reviewed: Liza Levy
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Created by ♥Golf (talk) and Tewapack (talk). Nominated by ♥Golf (talk) at 09:30, 23 December 2015 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen in online sources. The first hook is very good; I tweaked the grammar a bit. The second hook is rather gross, so I'm striking it. Offline hook ref AGF and cited inline. The image is public domain in the U.S. only; not sure if it should be used on the main page without clear copyright tags from other countries. QPQ done. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:45, 26 December 2015 (UTC)