Template:Did you know nominations/Ed Hall (One Life to Live)

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The result was: rejected by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 17:03, 28 April 2012 (UTC)

Ed Hall (One Life to Live)

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• ... that for his fictional role as police officer Ed Hall on the American soap opera One Life to Live, Al Freeman, Jr. became the first Black actor to earn a Daytime Emmy Award?

• Comment: Expanded from a redirect

Created/expanded by FrickFrack (talk). Self nom at 18:21, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

• - article length and creation date are fine, hook citation accepted in good faith as source is behind a pay wall, and hook length is good and interesting. Problem is the article is largely un-cited. Of the 7 total citations, 5 are in the lead, leaving the rest of the article basically un-cited. Add-in some more in-line citations to the remainder of the article and it will be good. Aboutmovies (talk) 05:54, 13 April 2012 (UTC)