The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:55, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
Overall: —valereee (talk) 19:50, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
Hook is using the word 'wedding' three times. Can we tweak to use it only once? —valereee (talk) 19:51, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
ALT1. ... that pioneering lesbian columnist Deb Price's wedding was the first same-sex wedding announcement in The Washington Post?
ALT2. ... that pioneering lesbian columnist Deb Price's same-sex wedding announcement in The Washington Post was the first in a major national newspaper?
@Valereee:, please have a look at the two variants above and see if they are better. Cheers. Ktin (talk) 03:54, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
Ktin, the source says one of the first, but that's an easy tweak in ALT2. —valereee (talk) 18:51, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
ALT2.1 ... that pioneering lesbian columnist Deb Price's same-sex wedding announcement in The Washington Post was one of the first in a major national newspaper?
@Valereee:, please see if this works? I am good with either of ALT1 and ALT2.1Ktin (talk) 20:13, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
That'll do it! Approve ALT1 and ALT2.1. —valereee (talk) 20:22, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
—valereee (talk) 19:50, 11 December 2020 (UTC)