Template:Did you know nominations/David Dalton (violist)
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:33, 2 May 2016 (UTC)
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David Dalton (violist)
[edit]- ... that David Dalton was inspired to become a violist after hearing William Primrose practice?
- ALT1:... that, "blown away" by William Primrose's viola playing, David Dalton decided to become a violist?
- ALT2:... that David Dalton successfully convinced other violists to donate music to the Primrose International Viola Archive?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Cruijffiaans
Created by Alexislynn(BYU) (talk) and Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk). Nominated by Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) at 19:52, 27 April 2016 (UTC).
Interesting life, on good sources. - I like ALT1 best! - In the article, try to drop the given name, once introduced, and spell out BYU before using the acronym. Consider a bit more lead. How do you feel about an infobox? (Compare Cecil Aronowitz) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:54, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you Gerda Arendt, I've added an infobox, which in turn led me to add a little more information to the page (but the source for the hook remains the same). My student should be expanding the lead section too. Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 17:42, 2 May 2016 (UTC)
