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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 06:01, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

Dan Jennings

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Created/expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nom at 16:44, 1 May 2012 (UTC)

  • Article is long enough and new enough. Well sourced and spot-checking reveals not copyvio or unduly close paraphrasing. The hook is short enough and is supported by an in-line citation. QPQ complete. All looks good. Cbl62 (talk) 03:31, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Promotion comment: the hook was confusing in that it could be read that the team vice president had a son named Dan, not that the veep himself was Dan. Also, the Marlins have many vice presidents, so "the [Marlins] team vice president" was somewhat misleading. The hook that is being placed into a prep area has been revised and edited as follows: