Template:Did you know nominations/Chupkatha

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:45, 18 July 2013 (UTC)

Chupkatha

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... that in the film Chupkatha (2012), singer Silajit Majumder made his debut as a film music composer?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Oia, Greece

Created/expanded by Bubaikumar (talk), Titodutta (talk). Nominated by Titodutta (talk) at 10:35, 9 June 2013 (UTC).

The plot deserves a good rewrite, I feel. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 10:48, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
Okay, can you please make the necessary copyedit? --Tito Dutta (talk • contributions • email) 11:08, 10 June 2013 (UTC)

I have not watched the film, and as such, I do not know the true plot. Perhaps it would be better for you and your partner to copyedit it yourself. And it is also not necessary to reference plots. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 03:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

No action in three weeks. Given the significant problems with the plot section, and no one who knows the plot capable of bringing it to an adequate standard, I don't see any alternative except to close the nomination. Notifying the nominator, in case this has been forgotten. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:49, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

Plot fixed now. Please check TheOriginalSoni (talk) 22:06, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

Full review of nomination now needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:20, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

Plot section is still unclear:

"The film is about two people, Sambit (Silajit Majumder) and his wife (Aparajita Auddy)" ... his wife doesn't appear again in the summary, but a third person does. Is the movie really about these two? It seems it is either about Sambit and Answeha, or all three.
On the other hand is a young medical student named Anwesha (Payel Roy), who is as lonely as Sambit." ... "on the other hand" doesn't many any sense. Perhaps you mean something like "Sambit meets a young medical..."?
"They experience an unfelt closeness" ... How can you experience something "unfelt"? I think you mean something else - unspoken, inappropriate, surprising, or some other word.
"even as the love" - doesn't make sense in context. Perhaps a typo of "even as they love"?

--ThaddeusB (talk) 06:11, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

Fixed all of them. TheOriginalSoni (talk) 09:44, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

Prose is now up to standards. Article length and date check out. Suggested hook is sufficiently interesting and has been verified by provided citation. --ThaddeusB (talk) 00:07, 18 July 2013 (UTC)