Template:Did you know nominations/Chris Remo
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:21, 18 March 2013 (UTC).
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Chris Remo
[edit]- ... that Chris Remo composed the soundtrack for Thirty Flights of Loving, a video game created for the Idle Thumbs revival Kickstarter?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Vrouwenhuis, Zwolle
- Comment: The hook might have too much jargon wrt Idle Thumbs and Kickstarter. Should I expand the hook a bit to explain those terms?
Created by Axem Titanium (talk). Self nominated at 14:17, 11 March 2013 (UTC).
The hook is indeed difficult to understand. I would suggest dropping "Kickstarter" and going with something like
- ALT1: "that Chris Remo composed the soundtrack for Thirty Flights of Loving, a video game created to support a crowd funded campaign to revive the Idle Thumbs podcast?"
- Article length, newness, compliance with policy, etc. has been verified. Hook fact is supported by multiple inline citations. --ThaddeusB (talk) 23:40, 16 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the ALT! I think it's much better. I fixed a wikilink and changed website to podcast to be more accurate. Support ALT. Axem Titanium (talk) 15:38, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- Great, we are good to go with ALT1 then. --ThaddeusB (talk) 18:44, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Axem Titanium (talk) 04:28, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the ALT! I think it's much better. I fixed a wikilink and changed website to podcast to be more accurate. Support ALT. Axem Titanium (talk) 15:38, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
