Template:Did you know nominations/Cerro Blanco (volcano)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:18, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
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Cerro Blanco (volcano)
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Cerro Blanco is the yellow-grey area slightly left below centre.
- ... that Cerro Blanco (pictured) is the site of the largest known Holocene volcanic eruption in the Andes?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Rolf Beck
- Comment: I did originally write this in my userspace; I only noticed afterwards that Robledo (volcano) existed as a one-sentence stub. I did decide to move my own draft to article space and redirect the previous article to it because the sources used Cerro Blanco more frequently than Robledo.
5x expanded by Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk). Self-nominated at 15:52, 20 September 2015 (UTC).
. In the article I read it has "the largest known eruption in the Central Andes during the Holocene." The hook needs a change to reflect this. Lappspira (talk) 21:05, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- Aye, that was an oversight. Corrected version:
- ALT1:... that Cerro Blanco (pictured) is the site of the largest known Holocene volcanic eruption in the Central Andes?
- As a sidenote, I am not familiar with any VEI 7 eruption in the Andes during the Holocene but this is only my own synthesis.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 21:26, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- , new hook (ALT1) is ok. Text is long enough and article new. No obvious close paraphrasing detected. The article is well sourced and has an appropriate tone. Editor has reviewed another DYK. The only complain I have is that the picture included in the nomination is not appropriate since it is too difficult to spot the volcano, or understand it at all if one is unfamiliar with ASTER images. Lappspira (talk) 05:16, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
- I am not disinclined at all to go with an imageless version of the hook, unfortunately I can't find any free images other than ASTER of the volcano.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 07:49, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
