Template:Did you know nominations/Carsaig Bay, Carsaig Arches

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 11:47, 13 July 2013 (UTC)

Carsaig Arches, Carsaig Bay

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... that the Carsaig Arches (pictured) are a natural formation to the west of Carsaig Bay on the Isle of Mull?

Created by Rosiestep (talk), Nvvchar (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 20:57, 1 July 2013 (UTC).

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Central City Red Zone and Template:Did you know nominations/1855 Atlantic hurricane season

Reviewing.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

Both articles are long enough and new enough.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:35, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

Although the hook is fully cited, I am concerned that the opening paragraph (that includes the content for the hook) mentions several specific locations (Rudha Fhaoilean (cliffs) and Tayvallich) not mentioned in the source.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:46, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

Hi Tony. I've rewritten the ledes. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:10, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

What about Rudha Fhaoilean?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:51, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

Added refs for Rudha Fhaoilean in both articles. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:09, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

Everything looks good.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:15, 10 July 2013 (UTC)