Template:Did you know nominations/Camp Jened
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:04, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
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Camp Jened
... that the summer camp Jened for disabled people was heavily influenced by the 1960s counterculture and hippie values?"Crip Camp".
- Reviewed: Laia Manzanares
Created by Treetopz (talk). Nominated by CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk) at 04:49, 5 April 2020 (UTC).
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Overall: --evrik (talk) 16:28, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- Alt1 ... that Camp Jened, a summer camp for disabled people, was heavily influenced by the 1960s counterculture and hippie values? "Crip Camp".
- File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Please review the hooks. QPQ needed. --evrik (talk) 16:28, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Evrik: QPQ done. The hook indeed sounds better. Thanks. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 13:43, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
While it does say that the man behind the camp is/was "something of a hippie", the statement within the article, used here as the hook, is unsupported by the two references. The thrust of this social experiment seems to be eliminating "stereotypes and labels" which doesn't necessarily translate to "hippie/counterculture" as imagined in the article.Gulbenk (talk) 02:03, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Gulbenk: Here is a better source [1]. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 02:38, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- Yes, that will do nicely. Attach that to the appropriate line in the article, and we should be able to move this along.Gulbenk (talk)
- @Gulbenk: Done. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 03:03, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- Good. I'll sign off on this once you complete the QPQ, which appears to be still pending.Gulbenk (talk) 03:07, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- Also, the NYT says: "Distractify, [is] a viral content site that fills Facebook news feeds with feel-good posts built largely on repackaging content from other websites." As such, it likely exercises limited editorial control over content. While a news aggregator might be an acceptable source to Wikipedia, let's not use it here to reinforce this hook. Gulbenk (talk) 03:37, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- Gulbenk, Removed Distractify. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 03:54, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
No problems, ready for DYK.Gulbenk (talk) 20:43, 10 April 2020 (UTC)