Template:Did you know nominations/Builders Building

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:14, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

Builders Building

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Builders Building

... that the Builders Building (pictured) was built to house construction industries, would eventually house the Chicago Board of Education, and was renovated to be a hotel? Source: NPS p. 6, Chicago Tribune
- ALT1:... that Skidmore, Owings & Merrill received a citation of merit for its renovation of Chicago's Builders Building (pictured)? Source: Gapp

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/St Mary's Church, Rolleston on Dove

Created by John M Wolfson (talk). Self-nominated at 17:29, 4 June 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: epicgenius (talk) 16:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I keep coming by to promote this, but I just don't find the hooks interesting. The first hook would benefit from using language other than building imagery—"building", "construction", "house". ALT1 is a nice award but not terribly interesting to a broad audience. It's a nice image. Could you propose something a little more hooky to accompany it? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 10:51, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

How about ALT2:... that the Builders Building (pictured) has been associated with construction industries, the Chicago Board of Education, and a hotel?

I somewhat disagree that the content of ALT0 is boring (relative to the other hooks that appear on the Main Page) but am open to rewording it. – John M Wolfson (talk • contribs) 19:08, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Well, that's not much different from ALT0. Restoring tick per epicgenius' review. Yoninah (talk) 19:45, 7 July 2020 (UTC)