Template:Did you know nominations/Brian Dawson

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 11:57, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

Brian Dawson

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... ~~that Australian rules football coach Brian Dawson quit his championship-winning team to focus on an academic career?~~

Reviewed: Ntema Ndungidi
Comment: * ALT ... that university professor Brian Dawson is a successful Australian rules football coach?

Created/expanded by Hack (talk), The-Pope (talk). Nominated by Hack (talk) at 07:23, 5 October 2012 (UTC)

for the main one. The article itself is fine, barely meeting the size requirement. The problem with the main hook is that the article does not say that, nor does the source. The source says to work overseas (no country is named) nor does the source say what this job is (it also does not say he is working at a school at that point), and given his job seems to be in Australia, it is a bit too much of a leap without other sources. The ALT passes. Aboutmovies (talk) 05:58, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Probably best to go with the ALT, the original hook doesn't really work. Hack (talk) 06:55, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

for the ALT then. Aboutmovies (talk) 06:33, 12 October 2012 (UTC)