Template:Did you know nominations/Bound (video game)

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 01:05, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

Bound (video game)

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~~... that in the video game Bound, the main character moves by ballet dancing?~~

ALT1: ... that in the video game Bound, the main character moves by dancing?

Created/expanded by Zxcvbnm (talk). Self-nominated at 21:19, 25 August 2016 (UTC).

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- ✓ This article is new and was created on 09:42, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 4833 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely according to automated metrics (19.4% confidence; confirm)
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- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 69 characters
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Paging FourViolas. E Eng 07:40, 26 August 2016 (UTC)

Full review needed by human reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:12, 15 September 2016 (UTC)

This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:12, 4 October 2016 (UTC)

reading through the article I do not see the hook fact actually stated in the article. It states "she's a ballet dancer", that they chose the motion capture model due to her experience in ballet and that the game developers were "inspired by a video of a modern jazz dance"- None of that supports what the hook says. MPJ-DK 14:52, 9 October 2016 (UTC)

From the article: "Every single animation of the character was replaced to change it to a dance move." This is also sourced. _{ZXCVBNM (TALK)} 17:03, 11 October 2016 (UTC)

@Zxcvbnm: - I totally agree with that, but the hook says ballet - there are so many other dance forms "dance moves" can be and the source does not specify. Now if the hook was modified to "By dancing" or something that's in line with the sources. MPJ-DK 17:06, 11 October 2016 (UTC)

@MPJ-DK: - You have a point, I think the hook can be modified to "moves by dancing" instead because I am not 100% sure that all of the dances are in fact ballet._{ZXCVBNM (TALK)} 01:11, 12 October 2016 (UTC)

Reviewer needed to check ALT1, which I have posted up top to address the issues with the original hook, now struck. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:24, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Approving ALT1 as per my previous review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:12, 17 October 2016 (UTC)