Template:Did you know nominations/Blink Bonny

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The result was: promoted by Schwede 66 04:51, 18 January 2012 (UTC)

Blink Bonny

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... that Blink Bonny (pictured) broke the course record when she became the second of only six fillies to have ever won the Derby Stakes?

Created/expanded by Tigerboy1966 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 23:08, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

New: Yes.
Length: Plenty.
Policy: Good work. Existing citation(s) should be linked in the "one of the best" paragraph in the first section.
Hook format: good. (121 characters incl spaces)
Hook content: interesting and neutral, BUT is not specifically stated in the article, so I could not trace it to citations. – Fayenatic (talk) 14:04, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

I have added comment +ref from official Epsom Derby site to clarify this point. Tigerboy1966 (talk) 14:20, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
Linked citations to "one of the best" claim. Tigerboy1966 (talk) 14:24, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for putting in the ref. I thought I did that before nominating, but I forgot to click "save" after previewing.... silly me... Thanks, again, Tigerboy. --PFHLai (talk) 12:44, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

I confirm that it's now good to go. Consider whether "Epsom Derby" (unpiped) would be clearer for an international audience than "Derby Stakes". – Fayenatic (talk) 19:49, 16 January 2012 (UTC)

I've removed the pipe and promoted the hook. Schwede 66 04:51, 18 January 2012 (UTC)