Template:Did you know nominations/Betty Paul

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:53, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

Betty Paul

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... that British actress and scriptwriter Betty Paul wrote for the first rural soap opera Weavers Green together with her husband?

Reviewed: When have we eaten from the same dish?

Created by SL93 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:57, 16 August 2019 (UTC).

Interesting life, on few but good sources, no copyvio obvious. What do you think of this version:

ALT1: ... that British actress and scriptwriter Betty Paul wrote with her husband for the first rural soap opera Weavers Green?

In the article, could you please first mention her first husband, then her second? I'm also not happy with the "no children" after she died, but up to you. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:29, 18 August 2019 (UTC)

ALT1 is fine. I'm not sure what you mean by the mentioning of husbands, but I think that I fixed it. I removed the no children part. SL93 (talk) 22:38, 18 August 2019 (UTC)