Template:Did you know nominations/Betrayer (video game)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Sven Manguard Wha? 03:35, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
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Betrayer (video game)
[edit]- ... that Eurogamer found the video game Betrayer to be inspired by The Elder Scrolls series, Far Cry 3, Dark Souls, and Silent Hill?
- ALT1:
... that in the video game Betrayer, players can hide their movement from enemies by only advancing when loud winds muffle their footsteps? - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hard Drive Productions, Inc. v. Does 1-1,495
- Hook Source: http://www.eurogamer.net/articles/2014-03-25-betrayer-review
- ALT1:
Created by Odie5533 (talk). Self nominated at 00:41, 27 March 2014 (UTC).
New (25th), long enough, "within policy", no copyvio found via spotcheck (no tool), QPQ done. ALT's hook doesn't have an immediate ref in article (see 3b). Please ping me if I don't respond. czar ♔ 04:11, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- @Czar: Done, though I do prefer the main one if that one is acceptable. --Odie5533 (talk) 04:29, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
gtg, main hook preferred czar ♔ 04:32, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- I'm simply not comfortable with pushing the original hook to the main page. Eurogamer says that the game is inspired by TES, FC3, Dark Souls, and Silent Hill. But that's not how the hook is worded at all; the hook makes it seem like a certainly, rather than a critic's opinions. As for the alt, I don't think it's interesting enough. How about:
- ALT2
... that the video game Betrayer uses a monochrome art style that has been called "undeniably striking"? - Czar, Odie5533, thoughts? Sven Manguard Wha? 07:10, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- Sounds fine to me. --Odie5533 (talk) 07:23, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- The main hook could be made more explicit by either mentioning Eurogamer or by rephrasing the "inspired" part of the article/hook to better reflect that the developers didn't necessarily have the inspiration in mind but the reviewers thought so. I agree that the ALT1 hook isn't great, but I thought the closer wouldn't use it anyway. ALT2 would be fine by me, but it needs the 3b immediate ref in the article and I would feel better if the source (EG) was mentioned instead of "has been called". czar ♔ 12:01, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- ALT2b ... that Eurogamer called the monochrome art style in the video game Betrayer "undeniably striking"?
- I've added the 3b citation and rephrased ALT2, Czar. Sven Manguard Wha? 19:07, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- Main and ALT2 gtg. ALT2 would be my personal preference. Main ce'd, ALT1 struck as uninteresting, new ALT2 is good. czar ♔ 02:29, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
- The main hook could be made more explicit by either mentioning Eurogamer or by rephrasing the "inspired" part of the article/hook to better reflect that the developers didn't necessarily have the inspiration in mind but the reviewers thought so. I agree that the ALT1 hook isn't great, but I thought the closer wouldn't use it anyway. ALT2 would be fine by me, but it needs the 3b immediate ref in the article and I would feel better if the source (EG) was mentioned instead of "has been called". czar ♔ 12:01, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
- Sounds fine to me. --Odie5533 (talk) 07:23, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
