Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of Anglesey Sound

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:50, 22 April 2013 (UTC).

Battle of Anglesey Sound

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... that the Norwegian king Magnus Barefoot shot Hugh of Montgomery dead with an arrow through his eye in the Battle of Anglesey Sound?

Created/expanded by Thhist (talk). Self nominated at 14:24, 19 April 2013 (UTC).

Looks good. It is cited to a book, but AGF. Could be a bit longer at 1800 characters of prose by my count. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 20:23, 19 April 2013 (UTC)

I know I'm being pedantic but DYK eligibility criteria rule 3b states the inline citation must be immediately beside the hook fact. It looks as if this is just cited at the end of the paragraph, so could this please be amended? Thanks. SagaciousPhil - Chat 15:27, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

It's in the same source, but I've now also put a reference directly after the DYK sentence so it doesn't become an issue. Otherwise, to the first comment, I'll see if I can improve the article a bit further in the next couple days (even though, as I understand, it's not strictly a requirement). Thhist (talk) 00:22, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

re-instate Rufous-crowned Sparrow's AGF tick as my query has been addressed. SagaciousPhil - Chat 06:38, 21 April 2013 (UTC)