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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 17:50, 30 December 2015 (UTC)

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Baekje Historic Areas

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Tomb of King Muryeong
Tomb of King Muryeong

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 07:53, 1 December 2015 (UTC).

  • DYK checklist template
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Passes DYK checklist. Very interesting about the 4,600 antiquities.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:23, 25 December 2015 (UTC)

  • The hook is a little hard to follow. I would shorten it and edit it this way:
  • ALT1: ... that in the UNESCO World Heritage Site of Baekje Historic Areas, about 4,600 antiquities were discovered in good condition in the Royal Tomb of King Muryeong (pictured)?
  • I'd also like to mention that the article could use a light copyedit. "The" and "a" are missing from these lines, for example: The Royal Tomb of King Muryeong belongs to 25th king of Baekje... It is located on top of small hill. The rest of the article similarly needs a polish. Yoninah (talk) 00:23, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Yoninah. Thanks. I have done the required c/e. Your alt hook suggestion is fine. Nvvchar. 03:20, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Restoring tick per Doug Coldwell's review. Yoninah (talk) 14:52, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
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