Template:Did you know nominations/Ayşegül Pehlivanlar, Aysel Özgan, Çağla Baş

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:24, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

Ayşegül Pehlivanlar, Aysel Özgan, Çağla Baş

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• Ayşegül Pehlivanlar
• Aysel Özgan
• Çağla Baş

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• ... that while the Turkish female wheelchair shooters Ayşegül Pehlivanlar and Çağla Baş compete for the first time at the Paralympics, Aysel Özgan takes part for the third time?

• Reviewed: Julia Meade Yellamma temple, Saundatti , Potala Tower
• Comment: Hook can be moved to holding area for the 2016 Summer Paralympics

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 12:57, 29 May 2016 (UTC).

• I will be doing the review of these three articles for the DYK criterias, giving my feedback one at a time.  MPJ-US  22:17, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Ayşegül Pehlivanlar

• New enough
• Large enough
• No copyright issues
• Hook is cited
• Sources look reliable
• Well written - There are some language issues here, I suspect the author (like myself) is not a natural English speaker. I have done a little copy editing to help out but I cannot figure out what this sentence is supposed to mean so I can fix it - "Ayşegül's mother was killed while she was compelled to use wheelchair."?

• @MPJ-DK: I've copy-edited that paragraph, and hope that it is now understandable. It seems that a mutilation has happened during your copy-editing. CeeGee 07:39, 18 June 2016 (UTC)

Aysel Özgan

• New enough
• Large enough
• No copyright issues
• Hook is not cited. Her qualifying is only listed in the lead and there is no source for it N

• @MPJ-DK: Hook fact is cited with Turkish-language ref #2. Please recheck. CeeGee 07:39, 18 June 2016 (UTC)

• The other sources look reliable
• Well written - For this one I did some copy editing, hopefully improving it.

Çağla Baş

• New enough
• Large enough
• No copyright issues
• Hook is cited
• Sources look reliable
• Well written - For this one I did some copy editing, hopefully improving it. But at this point it's okay Y (not using the DYK tick unless I approve the whole DYK)

• There is a source issue in one of them that needs to be addressed @CeeGee:.  MPJ-US  23:04, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

• Note: If approved then September 7 would be an appropriate date for it to run, the opening day of the event.  MPJ-US  22:43, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

• @MPJ-DK: Thank you very much indeed for your efforts. I hope all issues are addressed now. CeeGee 07:39, 18 June 2016 (UTC)

• - @CeeGee: Appreciate the copy edit, the word "compelled" threw me off but the clarification is now spot on. This is good to go now.  MPJ-US  08:05, 18 June 2016 (UTC)