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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

Axalta Coating Systems

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Created /expanded by ZappaOMati (talk). Self-nominated at 19:00, 28 July 2016 (UTC).


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The lead is too short for an article of that length. Nothing about the company's involvement in motorsports field was mentioned in the lead. Please address this issue. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga 12:57, 1 August 2016 (UTC)

@Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Lead expanded. Zappa24Mati 17:06, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
@ZappaOMati: The nomination is good to go with primary ALT. But ALT1 has some issues. It should be which had sponsored ... as Axalta Coating Systems is a company or a person. And the next correction that I don't think that the word had is to be used. Because it suggests that the company is no longer sponsoring the mentioned driver. It would be good if it changed to which sponsored .... Please make the corrections accordingly if it is to approved with any of the hooks else the nomination is GTG with the first hook. In that case strike out ALT1. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga 02:47, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
@Krishna Chaitanya Velaga:  Done Zappa24Mati 02:52, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
GTG with any of the hooks. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga 03:08, 2 August 2016 (UTC)