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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:23, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

Avrohom Yaakov Friedman (fifth Sadigura rebbe)

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Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nominated at 13:42, 18 November 2013 (UTC).

  • ALT1: ... that the father of the fifth Sadigura Rebbe, Rabbi Avrohom Yaakov Friedman, told his son to start learning Kabbalah at the age of 18? Yoninah (talk) 01:24, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
  • New and long enough, all paragraphs sourced, mostly to online sources, no copyvio/close paraphrasing problems detected in spotchecks. Neither can I see neutrality issues. Rewiew done. The original hook is in-line cited and interesting in the respect that his views were somewhat unconvetional for an Ultra-Orthodox leader. I prefer the orginal hook to the ALT1 which I thought was a bit messy to read because of the focus on the father. If nominator would rather have the alternative Kabbalah hook, I would prefer to have it slightly rephrased for clarity. Otherwise, good to go. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 18:47, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
  • I'm fine with the first hook. Thanks for the review! Yoninah (talk) 19:11, 28 November 2013 (UTC)