Template:Did you know nominations/Association of British Secretaries in America

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:04, 9 September 2014 (UTC)

Association of British Secretaries in America

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... that the Association of British Secretaries in America was created in the 1960s to assist a wave of such women coming to the United States to work and live?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Rondo in C minor (Bruckner)

Created by Wasted Time R (talk). Self nominated at 15:04, 6 September 2014 (UTC).

article is long and recent enough, no close paraphrasing found, hook is attention-grabbing and reliably sourced, but it would be helpful to specify that these were English women coming to the United States. Snuggums (talk / edits) 05:28, 9 September 2014 (UTC)

It seems a bit redundant, but if you think it is clearer, it is okay with me:

ALT1: ... that the Association of British Secretaries in America was created in the 1960s to assist a wave of women from Great Britain coming to the United States to work and live? Wasted Time R (talk) 09:50, 9 September 2014 (UTC)

going with ALT1 Snuggums (talk / edits) 12:52, 9 September 2014 (UTC)