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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 15:28, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Article was deleted; nomination closed as unsuccessful.

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Apple Face Shield

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Created by Feminist (talk). Self-nominated at 06:11, 8 April 2020 (UTC).


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: --valereee (talk) 14:00, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

  • Not loving the hook as is; you could fit 100 of anything in a box if the box was big enough. I'm thinking these boxes are probably about the size of a ream of paper, though, so fitting 100 in is interesting once you know that. Did you see anything in any of the sources about the size of the box? QPQ still needed. --valereee (talk) 14:31, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
    • Thanks; I've done the QPQ. Unfortunately I'm not seeing anything concerning the size of the box in the sources. ALT1: ... that the Apple Face Shield can be assembled in under two minutes? feminist (talk) 14:35, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
Whoops, sorry, missed seeing you'd responded! (I never mind being pinged, fwiw.) Hm...I actually think the ships flat is more interesting. Maybe if it was tweaked to something like the shield ships flat to allow 100 to be packed in each box? I'll leave it to the promoter to decide, approving both ALT0 and ALT1, and suggest that tweak to the promoter if that makes it more interesting to them, too. --valereee (talk) 13:13, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
@Valereee: ALT2: ... that the Apple Face Shield is packed flat, allowing 100 to fit in each box? feminist Wear a mask to protect everyone 17:16, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
Approving ALTs 0, 1, 2, personal preference for ALT2. --valereee (talk) 17:29, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Promoters: this article may need to move to Apple face shield, I've opened a thread at article talk —valereee (talk) 18:17, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Feminist, valereee, the recently added Background section includes a bare URL as reference; this will need to be turned into a proper reference to meet DYK requirements. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:01, 27 April 2020 (UTC)
Feminist has fixed it —valereee (talk) 16:25, 27 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Reference has been fixed; restoring tick per valereee's original review. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:35, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
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