The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Aoidh (talk) 21:20, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
I would like to review this. It will be my second DYK review so I will also ask that someone reviews my review. DaffodilOcean (talk) 10:48, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
Overall: I am quite new to reviewing DYK, so I would appreciate a second review.
I think this is an interesting article. However, my primary concern for DYK is the hook. While it is present in the article (and cited in the article), I am concerned that it requires people to know what the AAA is to be interesting. And, the article uses the term 'Triple A' and not 'AAA', which is also confusing. For those wondering, the group is Argentine Anticommunist Alliance. The hook presents two details that occur around the same time (she was told not to come to work; her husband was on the death list), but they are not directly related as the hook implies (or at least that's my understanding from the article). Also, at the time this happened, the two were not married so it seems odd to refer to 'her husband' at that time in her life. Is there another hook that could be suggested @Onegreatjoke: ? DaffodilOcean (talk) 13:09, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
@Evrik: - that's a simple enough change and still under the 200 character limit. Works for me, so I have changed the above "n" to a "y". However, I am new enough to reviewing for DYK, that I am not certain if that is all I have to do at this point. DaffodilOcean (talk) 21:36, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
Strike out the hooks not approved, and add the {{DYKtick}} to your last post. I just did it for you. --evrik(talk) 14:28, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
Thanks...learning something new every day. DaffodilOcean (talk) 14:54, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
I am quite new to reviewing DYK, so I would appreciate a second review.
I think this is an interesting article. However, my primary concern for DYK is the hook. While it is present in the article (and cited in the article), I am concerned that it requires people to know what the AAA is to be interesting. And, the article uses the term 'Triple A' and not 'AAA', which is also confusing. For those wondering, the group is Argentine Anticommunist Alliance. The hook presents two details that occur around the same time (she was told not to come to work; her husband was on the death list), but they are not directly related as the hook implies (or at least that's my understanding from the article). Also, at the time this happened, the two were not married so it seems odd to refer to 'her husband' at that time in her life. Is there another hook that could be suggested @Onegreatjoke: ? DaffodilOcean (talk) 13:09, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
@Evrik: - that's a simple enough change and still under the 200 character limit. Works for me, so I have changed the above "n" to a "y". However, I am new enough to reviewing for DYK, that I am not certain if that is all I have to do at this point. DaffodilOcean (talk) 21:36, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
