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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Edge3 (talk) 20:14, 25 February 2021 (UTC)

Amaptocare

  • Comment: Will do QPQ (this is my 6th nom) today / tomorrow - 3 done since, let's use John Atcheler for this one.

Created by SeoR (talk). Self-nominated at 06:40, 3 February 2021 (UTC).

  • This is only a comment for now, but while the hooks are quite good (I'm quite partial to ALT1 in particular), is there a way to make them snappier or slightly shorter? In the case of ALT1, it may be a good idea to focus on the "Dubliners donating and inscribing part" rather than it was one of Ireland's largest art projects. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:40, 13 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Thanks Narutolovehinata5; I offer ALT3 and ALT4, developing that theme with two different focal points ("permanent" in ALT4 adds emphasis, as the sentences by each person are literally stamped in enamelled metal on a plaque alongside, but is not essential). SeoR (talk) 20:44, 13 February 2021 (UTC)
  • This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline and any of the hooks could be used, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:28, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Hi there. I was reviewing this for promotion, when I noticed several large quotations in the "Reception and criticism" section. Excessive quotations are not allowed per WP:NFC#Text, and I think the section could be improved anyway by paraphrasing the content. Edge3 (talk) 15:44, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
Thanks - I am on the case. These two quotes were each tiny percentages of their texts, and I felt they had a nice impact in this format, but they will both be paraphrased or cut and line-quoted within 10 minutes. SeoR (talk) 18:15, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
Thank you! I'm promoting this now. Edge3 (talk) 20:14, 25 February 2021 (UTC)