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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 16:52, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
Alles, was von Gott geboren, BWV 80a
[edit]... that Bach used some of the lost music of his cantata Alles, was von Gott geboren, BWV 80a, first performed in Weimar (church pictured) on Oculi, the third Sunday in Lent, later in BWV 80?
- Reviewed: Bermuda fish chowder
- Comment: The Sunday was yesterday, I missed it, thanks for speedy processing. More elegant wording welcome.
Created/expanded by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 13:13, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
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... that the music of Bach's cantata Alles, was von Gott geboren, BWV 80a, composed in Weimar (church pictured) for Oculi, the third Sunday in Lent, is lost, but he later expanded some of the music in BWV 80? - I've struck the original hook because, if I'm reading things correctly, the cantata was written for Oculi, but the date of the first performance is uncertain. And, as you mentioned, the original was a little awkward; I think my ALT is slightly less awkward, but feel free to edit it. Everything looks fine. One source is offline and in German, and, for some reason, I can't reach the online source. The hook facts are referenced to the offline source. One minor thing...
DYK rules require an inline ref immediately after the hook fact. The "music is lost" part has a ref at the end of the paragraph. If it was an online source I'd add a ref after the hook fact myself, but I wouldn't want to do that for an offline one. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 21:29, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for looking with attention to details. As for Oculi, the year is uncertain, but both years it was the third Sunday in Lent, related to the prescribed readings. I duplicated the online ref for the "lost" (sorry I missed it), the other online Sources say "nicht erhalten" (Bach website) and "verschollen" (University of Alberta). I suggest to drop the 3rd Sunday, we are past the 6th, saying "most" instead of "some" (4 of 6 movements, and one not taken is the closing choral, replaced by a different setting of the same melody):
- ALT2: ... that the music of Bach's cantata Alles, was von Gott geboren, BWV 80a, composed in Weimar (church pictured) for the Lenten Sunday Oculi, is lost, but he later expanded most of the music in BWV 80? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:48, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for duplicating the ref after the hook fact. I was thrown off by the different dates, but I should have realized that you were correct and they were both Oculi, just of different years. (It's too bad it took sixteen days for this to get reviewed – not exactly the "speedy processing" you were hoping for – but at least it's approved now....) MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 09:45, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
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