Template:Did you know nominations/Alle Menschen höret auf dies neue Lied

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The result was: promoted by MeegsC (talk) 13:57, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Alle Menschen höret auf dies neue Lied

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• ... that "Alle Menschen höret auf dies neue Lied", a new offertory hymn with a simple melody, has been suggested for confirmation? Source: [1]

• Reviewed: James Reuel Smith

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 18:53, 6 July 2021 (UTC).

• The article is new enough, long enough, neutral and no copyvio obvious. An offline source and other sources in foreign languages are accepted AGF. QPQ done. Good to go. Corachow (talk) 13:29, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Gerda Arendt, this hook reads a bit awkwardly in English; it needs a word or two added. Would "... that "Alle Menschen höret auf dies neue Lied", a new offertory hymn with a simple melody, has been suggested for use in the sacrament of confirmation?" or "... that "Alle Menschen höret auf dies neue Lied", a new offertory hymn with a simple melody, has been suggested for use in confirmation masses?" be acceptable to you? MeegsC (talk) 11:52, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

    Thank you, and the last one works best for me, - the other sounds a bit as if the hymn make the sacrarement valid. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:23, 18 July 2021 (UTC)