Template:Did you know nominations/Alexander Sinton Secondary School

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:15, 20 August 2014 (UTC)

Alexander Sinton Secondary School

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... that students who were demanding to be taught, barricaded the police into their Cape Town school, after they came to arrest them?

ALT1:... that three protesters were killed near a Cape Town school by armed police hidden in a "Trojan Horse" vehicle?
Reviewed: QPQ = Emma Irene Åström
Comment: copy edits, fixed faults and alts welcome

5x expanded by Victuallers (talk). Self nominated at 11:00, 18 August 2014 (UTC).

5x expansion is long enough and recent enough. QPQ done. Using Dup detector on the main sources shows no close paraphrasing or copyvios. Article is well-cited with each para cited, and NPOV. However, the hook facts need to have inline citations immediately thereafter, not just at the end of the relevant paragraph. The ALT hook uses a book - could you kindly use Google books citation tool to help me find the actual page online? Edwardx (talk) 12:45, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

Hi Edward - I think that does it. Thanks for the review! Victuallers (talk) 17:38, 19 August 2014 (UTC)

I've added a few more sources for the Trojan Horse Incident. Edwardx (talk) 19:47, 19 August 2014 (UTC)