Template:Did you know nominations/Albert Kirchner
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:48, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
Albert Kirchner
[edit]- ... that Albert Kirchner, who made many pornographic films, was the first filmmaker to direct a film about the life of Christ?
- Reviewed: Gustav III of Sweden's coffee experiment — Preceding unsigned comment added by SupernovaExplosion (talk • contribs) 17:26, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by --SupernovaExplosion (talk) 08:11, 2 February 2012 (UTC). Nominated by SupernovaExplosion (talk) at 08:11, 2 February 2012 (UTC)
- I reviewed Bruno Braquehais, Acacia reficiens, Volunia and Greta Schiller, Genisys Credit Union, Vicky Donor. --SupernovaExplosion Talk 10:09, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
Newness: Article nominated on February 2, nominated for that day. Article is 1,500+ characters. Article reads as neutral to me. All the text is cited inline. Hook is properly formatted. Article has no pictures so no problems related to copyright of images. Hook is supported by sources. Nominator has reviewed another article.
Slight close paraphrasing concerns. See this. I believe I have fixed this problem. The rest of the phrasing I just do not think can really be changed much with out changing the meaning, though some one may want to verify this.
Other sources support text and are free of paraphrasing issues.
If my fixes addresses close paraphrasing issues, good to go. --LauraHale (talk) 06:16, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
- Hi Laura, thanks for your review and edit. I have fixed the close paraphrasing concern. Please re-review the article, I hope it is ok now. --SupernovaExplosion Talk 07:19, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
For me, things have been fixed well enough to make it good to go. --LauraHale (talk) 07:26, 20 February 2012 (UTC)