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The result was: promoted by CSJJ104 (talk) 20:18, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
Overall: Some overlap with other sources found using Earwig's Copyvio Detector, but these are straightforward descriptions and fine per WP:LIMITED IMO. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:43, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
I'm a little concerned about the chronology of the first hook and ALT1, ironically, unless I'm misreading something. I think they need tweaking.
"that New York City's "clock master" was hired after repairing a clock at 346 Broadway, even though he had never fixed a clock before?" - doesn't quite work for me. By the time he was hired, he had fixed a clock.
"that New York City's "clock master" had never fixed a clock before repairing the one above 346 Broadway?" - but he wasn't the clock master before that repair, was he?
No issues with ALTs 2, 3, 4. ALT2 is the least interesting of the bunch to me. QPQ is pending. Thanks for your excellent work on the artile, Epicgenius. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:46, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
Hi all, I'm leaving a second review for this article. In short, it's really well-researched and brimming with correctly citated reliable sources. Really great job! There are no copyvio issues according to Earwig. My pick for the hook is ALT4 as I'm a stickler for mysterious, humourous hooks. But I'd support 2 or 3 like Benny above. Pending a QPQ I'm happy to support.--Coin945 (talk) 23:25, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
@BennyOnTheLoose and Coin945: Thanks for both of your reviews. I have done a QPQ now - it seems to have slipped my mind, sorry about that. I'm also suggesting another hook to replace ALTs 0 and 1: Epicgenius (talk) 13:19, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
ALT5: ... that Marvin Schneider, who had never fixed a clock before repairing the one above 346 Broadway, later became New York City's "clock master"? Epicgenius (talk) 13:19, 12 September 2022 (UTC)