Talk:Zorica Brunclik/Archive 1

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Could someone please tell me what is wrong with this article so I can fix it? I'm new to writing wikipedia pages IgorYu (talk) 05:46, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

Cleaning up

IgorYu, I can see that Zorica Brunclik is a prolific artist, but it is important to think about what most people would be looking for if they were wanting to know more information about her and her work. While the discography is nice to have, it takes away from the rest of the article when you list out every song recorded on the album. If you want to have this information present, it may be best to move these into a new page, like Zorica Brunclik Discography. I actually did not notice the first time I read this article that there was more content below the discography. Look at how the structure of several other prolific artist pages are formatted and see what they do in order to streamline the content. Good examples to follow would be artists from Category:Rock_and_Roll_Hall_of_Fame_inductees such as:

• Ray_Charles
• Neil_Diamond
• AC/DC
• Grateful_Dead

You also should weight, does it bring enough value to the article to include the live shows? Not many, if any of the articles listed above list out live shows. Once again, it detracts from the purpose of the article, which I would assume is to introduce people to this artist, or for people who know this artist, provide more information on her life and accomplishments. You've got a good start here, and a lot of information, but just need to work a bit on what the reader is looking for and writing an engaging article. Happy Editing. Rmosler | ● 02:42, 11 April 2014 (UTC)