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Reviewer: Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk · contribs) 15:04, 19 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I will be reviewing this. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 15:04, 19 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Early life

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Junior career

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2007–09: First steps

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2010: First top 10 win, top 200

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2011–12: Modest results, fall in rankings, shoulder surgery

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2013: Back in the top 200

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2014: Breakthrough and top 50

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2015: Continued success until second-half slump

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2016: Wrist injury

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  • ” she was lost” – “she lost”
  • ”In March, she traveled to the United States, first to play in the Indian Wells Open, where she beat Jamie Loeb in the first round, but could not beat Victoria Azarenka in the next round.” – run-on sentence. How about “In March, she traveled to the United States, where her first event was the Indian Wells Open. She beat Jamie Loeb in the first round, but could not beat Victoria Azarenka in the next round.”
  • ” On clay, she reached two second rounds, at the Internationaux de Strasbourg losing to Alla Kudryavtseva and then at the French Open losing to Simona Halep.” – “On clay, she reached two second rounds: the Internationaux de Strasbourg, where she lost to Alla Kudryavtseva, and the French Open, where she lost to Simona Halep.”

2017: Return to tour, first WTA title

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2018: Back as a top 100 mainstay and another injury

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2019–20: Out of form

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2021?

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  • Has she done anything this year yet?

Billie Jean King Cup

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“That was enough for Kazakhstan to win their round-robin group, however, later they lost to Japan in the play-off, and missing another chance to get to the World Group II play-off.” – “That was enough for Kazakhstan to win their round-robin group; however, they later lost to Japan in the play-off, missing another chance to get to the World Group II play-off.”

Playing style

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  • Section looks good!

Apparel and equipment

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  • Section looks good!

Coaching team

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  • ”After her shoulder surgery that she underwent in late 2011, she started a collaboration with a new coach Alan Ma in Guangzhou” – “After undergoing shoulder surgery in late 2011, she started working with Alan Ma in Guangzhou.”

Personal life

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  • ” tournament is Wimbledon, being in love with its tradition and history” – “tournament is Wimbledon, which she loves for its tradition and history”
  • ” She is the third player from Kazakhstan to win that award, and they have combined for four such awards in total” – “She is the third player from Kazakhstan to win that award, and hers was the fourth won by a Kazakhstan national.”
  • ” she was nominated for the award of Newcomer of the Year, but lost to Belinda Bencic” – “she was nominated for Newcomer of the Year but lost to Belinda Bencic”

References

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Might look like a lot of changes listed, but these are mostly picky grammar things because you’ve done a great job on the article already. Let me know when these changes are addressed, and I'll take another look! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 19:20, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article looks good now; passing! Nice job! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 16:45, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Sanfranciscogiants17: Thank you! JamesAndersoon (talk) 18:59, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Сергей РАЙЛЯН (14 November 2014). "Зарина ДИЯС: Скромное обаяние принцессы тенниса [in Russian]" [Zarina DIYAS: The discreet charm of a tennis princess]. caravan.kz. Retrieved 22 April 2021.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link)