Talk:Yuri on Ice/GA1
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 22:28, 9 April 2017 (UTC)
The article looks in good shape to become a GA but there are somethings that bother me:
- In the lead, could you explain a little more about the plot? At first sounds like they only focus on relationships and nothing about skating.
- I've expanded the lead now. ISD (talk) 08:25, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
- Remember to wikilink the characters especially since there is a character list.
- I've added wikilinks to the characters in the lead. ISD (talk) 08:25, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
- The broadcast and distribution could be moved to episode list.
- I've moved this section to the list. ISD (talk) 08:25, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
- Try to avoid to relying too much on quotes and instead reword them to be as neutral as possible.
- Are there any particular quotes that should be removed? Also, are we allowed to reword quotes? Surely we are meant to represent the quotes as actually as possible rather than change them to suit the article? ISD (talk) 08:25, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
Other than that, I think the article could become a GA. Good work.Tintor2 (talk) 22:28, 9 April 2017 (UTC)
- Passed.Tintor2 (talk) 14:00, 10 April 2017 (UTC)